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The Rime of the Ancient Mariner
Samuel Taylor ColeridgeThe Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Taylor Coleridge (1798)The Rime of the Ancient Mariner is the long literary ballad with which Coleridge opened Lyrical Ballads in 1798; the text here is his revised version in seven parts.1798 (revised 1817) · 18th Century · Poetry · English
Abstract
Background. During walks in the Quantock Hills, Coleridge and Wordsworth planned a ballad to pay for a trip; Wordsworth proposed the bird-killing from an eighteenth-century privateer's account. Coleridge finished it alone, and it led off their anonymous joint collection.
Content. Outside a marriage feast, a grey old seaman compels a guest to hear how, far south among icebergs, he killed a friendly bird. Winds died, his shipmates perished of thirst after a phantom vessel came, and he alone survived amid corpses until, admiring sea serpents by moonlight, he felt love and could pray. Unseen powers carried him home, a hermit absolved him, and he now roams, retelling the story.
Form. Coleridge borrows the folk ballad's quatrains, refrains and stark imagery, mixing archaic words with vivid colour.
Themes. The tale dramatises sin against creation, the loneliness of guilt, grace that comes before merit, and a penance of lifelong witness; it ends by uniting love of creatures with prayer to their Maker.
Reception. Early critics, including Southey, called the ballad obscure, and Wordsworth half-apologised for it in 1800. Later generations made it one of the best-known poems in the language, and its images of thirst, calm and the hung bird passed into proverb.
For students. Read it aloud in parts; ask what Part IV teaches about grace.
Main characters
- The Ancient Mariner: Old sailor narrating his crime and penance
- The Wedding-Guest: Young man detained to listen
- The albatross: The bird he kills
- Death and Life-in-Death: Spectral dice players
- The Hermit: Holy man who absolves him
Summary
The Rime of the Ancient Mariner is the long literary ballad with which Coleridge opened Lyrical Ballads in 1798; the text here is his revised version in seven parts. An old sailor stops one of three young men on their way to a wedding feast and, holding him with his glittering eye, forces him to listen to a tale. His ship was driven by storms into the frozen south, where an albatross came through the fog. The crew hailed it as a good omen, the ice split, and a south wind sprang up; but the Mariner, for no stated reason, shot the bird with his crossbow. The ship sailed north into the Pacific, the wind died, and the crew were becalmed under a burning sun, dying of thirst: water, water everywhere, nor any drop to drink. The sailors hung the dead albatross around the Mariner's neck instead of a cross. A spectral ship appeared bearing Death and Life-in-Death, who diced for the crew; Death won the two hundred sailors, who dropped dead one by one, and Life-in-Death won the Mariner. Alone on the rotting sea for seven days, unable to pray, he watched the water snakes in the moonlight, and suddenly a spring of love gushed from his heart and he blessed them unaware. At that moment he could pray, and the albatross fell from his neck into the sea. Rain fell, angelic spirits moved the dead bodies to work the ship, and he was brought home to his own harbour, where a Hermit absolved him as the ship sank. Ever since, an agony returns that forces him to wander and tell his tale. He ends with a moral: he prays best who loves best all things both great and small, for the dear God who loves us made and loves all. The Wedding-Guest goes away a sadder and a wiser man. The poem joins ballad simplicity with a mysterious drama of sin, penance and grace.
Virtues in this work
Plot or Argument
- Part I: the albatross
The Mariner stops a Wedding-Guest and tells how his ship reached the polar ice, where an albatross brought good luck until he shot it.
- Part II: the calm
The wind fails; the crew first blame and then approve the deed; becalmed and parched, they hang the albatross on his neck.
- Part III: Death and Life-in-Death
A ghost ship arrives; Death wins the crew and Life-in-Death wins the Mariner; two hundred men die.
- Part IV: the blessing
Alone and unable to pray, he sees the beauty of the water snakes and blesses them; the albatross falls away.
- Parts V-VI: the voyage home
Rain falls, spirits drive the ship, and two voices discuss his penance; he reaches his home harbour.
- Part VII: the Hermit and the moral
The ship sinks, the Hermit shrives him, and he is doomed to retell his tale; he teaches love of all God's creatures.
Characters
- The Ancient Mariner, narrator
An old sailor compelled to tell how he killed an albatross and was saved by grace.
- The Wedding-Guest, listener
A young man held from a wedding feast to hear the tale.
- The albatross, bird
A sea bird welcomed as a blessing and shot by the Mariner.
- Death and Life-in-Death, spectres
Figures on the ghost ship who dice for the crew.
- The Hermit, holy man
The good hermit of the wood who absolves the Mariner.
Lessons
Sin against creation
The Mariner's unexplained killing of the albatross is an offence against a creature and against the hospitality of God's world. The poem treats the deed as sin with real consequences.
- Why might Coleridge leave the motive unexplained?
- How do the crew judge the deed, and why do they change their minds?
- What does hanging the albatross in place of a cross suggest?
Grace before effort
The turning point comes when he blesses the water snakes unaware. Love and prayer are given before he earns anything.
- What does the Mariner see before he can pray?
- Why does Coleridge say unaware?
- How does this compare with Ephesians 2:8-9?
Penance and witness
Even after absolution he must tell his tale again and again. The poem asks how forgiveness and lasting consequence fit together.
- Why must he keep telling his story?
- What does the Wedding-Guest learn?
- Is the final moral too simple for the poem?
Context
Coleridge planned the poem with Wordsworth on a walk in November 1797 in the Quantock Hills; Wordsworth suggested the shooting of the albatross after reading of it in a voyage narrative by George Shelvocke. Exploration of the southern oceans by Cook and others filled readers with images of ice and sea.
Composition
Published anonymously as the first poem in Lyrical Ballads (1798) in a deliberately archaic spelling; Coleridge revised it for the 1800 edition and added the marginal prose gloss in Sibylline Leaves (1817). This Gutenberg text is the revised poem without the gloss.
Reception
Early reviewers found it obscure, but it became one of the most quoted poems in English, with phrases like an albatross around one's neck entering everyday speech.
Comparisons
- Tam o’ Shanter
Burns's comic supernatural journey of the same decade.
- The Odyssey
The archetypal sea voyage of trial and homecoming.
- Moby-Dick
Melville's sea epic of obsession and judgment owes much to Coleridge.
- Lyrical Ballads
The 1798 volume the poem opened, in its earlier archaic spelling.
Quotes
Frequently cited
“Water, water, every where, Nor any drop to drink.”
Frequently cited
“Alone, alone, all, all alone,”
Frequently cited
“A spring of love gushed from my heart, And I blessed them unaware:”
Frequently cited
“He prayeth best, who loveth best All things both great and small; For the dear God who loveth us He made and loveth all.”
“A sadder and a wiser man, He rose the morrow morn.”
For Students
A reading companion for classical Christian high school students. See the student guide.
Reading Guide
Watch for
- The frame: the Wedding-Guest held by the Mariner's glittering eye.
- How the crew's judgment of the albatross changes with the weather.
- The ghost ship and its dice game.
- The water snakes in Part IV and the moment he blesses them.
- The Hermit and the final moral.
Key terms and names
- Literary ballad
- A poem by a known author imitating the folk ballad's stanza, repetition and supernatural matter.
- Albatross
- A great southern sea bird; to have one around your neck now means a burden of guilt.
- Life-in-Death
- The spectral woman who wins the Mariner, condemning him to live on in suffering.
- Shrive
- To hear confession and grant absolution, as the Hermit does.
- Kirk
- A church; the Mariner sees his home kirk on returning.
- Penance
- Suffering or acts undertaken as a sign of repentance.
Seminar Questions
- Comprehension Why does the Mariner stop the Wedding-Guest?
- Comprehension What happens after he shoots the albatross?
- Comprehension What breaks the curse in Part IV?
- Interpretation Why does Coleridge give no motive for the killing?
- Interpretation What is the meaning of the albatross hung in place of a cross?
- Interpretation Why must the Mariner keep telling his tale?
- Big Question Can a person be forgiven and still bear the consequences of sin?
Faith Connections
- Psalm 104:24-25 (Scripture)
The psalmist praises God for the creatures of the great and wide sea; the Mariner learns to see the water snakes this way.
- Romans 5:20 (Scripture)
Where sin abounded, grace abounded much more; the blessing comes unearned in the depth of desolation.
- Matthew 10:29 (Scripture)
Not a sparrow falls without the Father; compare the moral that God loves all things great and small.
- Augustine, Confessions II (Great Conversation)
Augustine's theft of pears, done for no reason but the doing, parallels the motiveless shooting of the albatross.
Logic and Rhetoric
Central argument: The Mariner's motiveless killing of a creature brings guilt, isolation and death; grace comes when he loves the creatures unaware and can pray; so true prayer is bound up with love of all God has made, and the sinner must bear witness to what he learned.
Rhetorical device: repetition. Water, water, every where; Alone, alone, all, all alone: doubled words enact thirst and loneliness.
Debate: Resolved: that the Mariner's final moral fully explains the poem.
Memory Work
A spring of love gushed from my heart, And I blessed them unaware:
He prayeth best, who loveth best All things both great and small; For the dear God who loveth us He made and loveth all.
Writing Prompts
Essay: Trace the Mariner's path from crime through isolation to grace and witness, and explain the role of the water snakes.
Comparison with Tam o’ Shanter: Compare the supernatural journeys in Coleridge's and Burns's poems: what does each traveller learn, and how serious is each poet?
Creative Prompts
- Classroom
Divide the class into seven groups, one per part; each performs its part aloud with a one-sentence summary.
- Essay
Is the Mariner's moral the true meaning of the poem? Argue from Part IV.
- Poetry
Write six ballad stanzas telling a modern tale of a careless act and its consequences.
- Dialogue
Write the conversation between the Wedding-Guest and a friend the next morning.
Further Reading
- Lyrical Ballads, William Wordsworth and Samuel Taylor Coleridge
The 1798 volume.
- Biographia Literaria, Samuel Taylor Coleridge
Chapter XIV explains the plan of Lyrical Ballads.
- Coleridge's Ancient Mariner and Select Poems, Andrew J. George (ed.)
School edition (1902).
Verification notes
Text from Gutenberg #151, the revised poem in seven parts without the 1817 prose gloss. Wordsworth's suggestion of the albatross from Shelvocke is recorded in Wordsworth's own later note.
No verification flags recorded.